faller Chapter 9 goat

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Chapter 9

goat

i is like grass stuff that grow then stuff that find eat is thing that is there thing that try get away thing stuff i try take away from i is make mad make i is mad mad i is tell i is throw head at jump at so taking stop if they is go go i is not so mad not so mad not so mad not has throw head jump jump stupid two leg stupid two leg is make mad i is stupidest i is go eat all more eat more stupid two leg but all time all time all time but when no time all time stupid stupid ugly two leg in way all time i is like boy but boy i is like but boy stupid sometime too but like stupid two leg boy but not so bad but sometime bring stuff eat lot time bring stuff i is eat still ugly boy okay but not not not give eat smell two leg stupid two leg boy okay but i is like boy but i is like grass i is like jump i is good jump i is like eat can can tasty can i is like tasty can i is like boy not bug too much not make i is mad too much too much hunger alway hunger stuff that grow not not not find thing but hunger boy bring thing sometime boy not stupid leg two leg throw i head not bad but sometime go sometime come alway bring thing eat i sometime stay i follow is boy sometime i not is like rope neck but i try is eat rope too rope is not let i go is not let i jump is not let i find eat i is not like rope boy come boy go not noise too not move too so wait wait wait wait wait wait boy not come wait wait wait more not come wait wait not jump i is like jump i is good jump boy eat eat hunger hunger so hunger hunger boy not come wait wait wait wait wait then come then eat nice eat feed hunger hunger boy come food i is eat lot tasty eat no more wait wait i is throw head no cause anger cause happy boy but come back scratch behind ear i is laugh i is run i is jump i is like scratch back ear no rope boy hear lot eat happy happy laugh laugh throw head boy scratch other ear better better scratch under chin chinny chin better happy happy laugh laugh laugh jump climb i is like jump climb i is good jump climb i is eat jump climb eat eat i is run i is throw head i is eat eat jump climb eat run eat i is throw head eat eat eat i is like eat scratch ear many thing i is like so many thing make mad but like stupid two leg stupid stupid two leg think know thing make sound make noise so lot noise stupid only two leg think know think know nothing know stupid stupid stupid make i is mad so mad not like two leg i is like boy but i is like boy but two leg ugly so ugly no hair is no mouth is just teeth is so ugly so ugly only two leg no hair just teeth make funny sound all funny sound all time noise all noise just teeth ugly ugly ugly like all like stupid two leg like but not like stupid stupid ugly ugly like not like but i is like boy but i is like grass i is like climb i is like jump i is good climb jump i is i is like eat like chew like run like throw head sometime i is like but i is like boy but i no is like rope too hard eat but i no is like alone but time nothing eat nothing climb nothing jump but all is past rope but world is past rope but so i no is like i is like when boy is on eat i play with i is nice nice jump jump throw head i is like grass i is like tasty eat but but but now two leg come field but come i is ready ready throw head but i is guard field i is guard boy i is ready two leg stop but now stop away is ready but boy two leg call at now not danger call at i is ready guard still but boy go two leg with but not danger act i is not like i is go go go guard boy i is guard field i is is go too but but now is two leg lady is from noise smell beast big ugly smell beast she come always i is not like noise smell beast two leg lady bring eat sometime but i is like eat but sometime two leg lady hide i is not like two leg lady hide eat has eat smell food big noise smell beast i is want go i is want go now boy two leg walk walk but so i too go eat behind but away but i is like eat i is call at boy go go away guard boy i two leg but i is go go away eat nother noise smell beast now bad two leg two leg not like not good i is call boy two leg go go two leg lady call now scare call scare scare eat fall good eat fall i is call bad eat fall bad scare call bad two leg call danger call i is call bad danger scare scare boy two leg stop lady two leg call scare scare bad two leg danger mad now call boy two leg stop i is stop all stop stop stop two leg lie down ground boy run boy run scare i is go boy food fall away boy go i is go i is not like i is not like i is go go but boy go boy run now all two leg away i is go is guard boy boy go i is go i is run boy is run i is not like i is not like run run leave eat most like run but but but i is go boy is go i boy is go go go run run go go go away run go go i is go away is go go go away go go go go i is go boy is go boy i is go go go go away is go away is run run go go away i is go with boy but i is boy is two leg is run run run run go go run run run

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