comes the winter
as always, I welcome any feedback anyone is willing to provide... comes the fierce and crackling cold comes winter's martial roar chill winds whisper the alarm sneaking dark creeps in subtle march summer like a perfumed coward slinks away gaudy sun fondled earth falls pale with fear comes the winter comes the war beautiful treacherous grey bearded and vain loud and harsh with terrible wonder ice mailed vast and fueled by ancient fury charging on frothing storm dark cloud steed he comes he comes the world shrinks before him bows and bends to his shuddering might cannot stop him divert him from his path his primeval will mightier than any bloated wit all shiver at his voice quiver at his touch comes the old man comes the winter comes nature's unyielding guard and we we can only wait or flee when he comes comes he and the earth everything we know trembles
